Session 1B | Nov 02, 2016
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Session 1B | Nov 02, 2016

SESSION 3


HAITAM DAOUDI

Classwork

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Homework

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Discussion

5 responses to “SESSION 3”

  1. Neko says:

    Cool work so far (class+1st homework). Looking forward to see more :)

  2. Neko says:

    Homework: nice top view… The 3rd image has a composition that is slightly confusing, as if we are not sure where we are supposed to look (I like the column in the front, though). Looking forward to see more – the more you practice the better you get :) Thanks

    • HAITAM DAOUDI says:

      I retouched the 3rd image. I was trying to convey depth with it, but I guess the contrast between the objects wasn’t big enough. I made the tower in the back smaller and blurred slightly what is far while sharpening the column. I also tried making it bigger but it did not work that well. I was also trying to apply the rule of 1/3 with the column but I did not succeed, that’s why I pushed it to the edge. Thanks for the comment!

  3. Neko says:

    The rendering of the stairs = very, VERY nice! Also, the images look much better retouches! :)

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