Session 1B | Nov 11, 2015
Almost excellent composition. I have some suggestions that I will sketch later.
Hey so this is very interesting composition, I wanted to propose to push it further in the same direction.
First, continue the pattern to fill the entire paper; then we will remove some rectangles from the center to free up space for text, that becomes “in the middle of the city”.
Since the theme is Smart City, which implies connectivity, let’s just create a new layer behind rectangles, and draw vertical and horizontal lines that give additional rhythm to composition and emphasize the idea of “connectivity”. Also I removed the outlines (stroke) from the rectangles, because we want lines to represent connections, not boundaries.
Then the text is grouped by meaning into the central white area, to form the effect of ‘closure’.
That’s amazing Neko!!! Thank you very much for all your help and excellent advice. I’ll take into account all your are saying in my next workd
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