Session 2C | Dec 12, 2015
Hi Neko, this is my render, I would really know what you think about it and I need feedbacks to improve it, thank you!
There are several distracting things, first the brush work that you did is too obvious
Then the materials, these are good (except the glass), but there is no skylight so practically it looks like the scene has no light.
Finally, better use 2-point perspective to keep the vertical lines vertical. (Properties tab, see in, for example, Winter Scene tutorial, where I set the 2-point perspective I did when setting up the view).
Also, the glass – I would better turn it off and do a render without it. Then fake the glass in Photoshop (tutorial on layer masks).
But the first impression is: too much dark brush and not enough lighting. I think with these suggestions it will look way better.
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