Session 0B | Oct 29, 2015
CLOSURE SIMMETRY DARK: Excellent closure effect! Composition would look even better if the bottom line of the black shape was horizontal (right now it rises slightly to the right, which kills the symmetry a bit).
that’s true.. I did it again and I’m going to substitute the picture in a few minutes!
Cool, I’ve seen you’ve changed image. Now maybe you want to try, on this same image, the “Rule of 1/3”, to see if that makes it look even better?
DRAMATIC GROUPED DEPTH: Again excellent work. Great drama, plus very smart use of paper clips to present not only a small but also a “light” version of a heavy cross made of pencils in the foreground.
thank you a lot!
NEGATIVE SHAPE LOW CONTRAST: REALLY nice image! Only comment is that maybe it’s not low-contrast enough, since the glasses are still very dark grey. But still this is great composition on many levels (including excellent use of “rule of 1/3”!).
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