Session 2B | Nov 16, 2016
I like the sketches but the composition seem to be a bit flat and undecided. Don’t know if the terrain is flat or the top of the hill (which should be emphasized then). And whether the composition is symmetrical or asymmetrical (which I assume is the intention). I think confusions come from the camera position which is very undecided. Positioning your camera should either go for showing “objective shots” like the shots from above, or the subjective ones (from eye-level). I feel your intention would work better with a subjetive shot like the following sketch, although I may be wrong:
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