Session 1B | Nov 11, 2015
Hey so there are some nice ideas here, but overall composition is a bit chaotic, I’ll sketch some suggestions.
Ah ok, this is MUCH better now!
Thanks Neko,,!! Could you sketch me some suggestions you were talking about. I would really like to know how I could improve the poster composition..
Sure! Well, my main critic to your poster goes to the fact that you’ve put several symbols there (car, earth), but you didn’t make any relationship between them – neither visual nor symbolic. So I proposed rearranging them in a way they tell a story. Please note how I used simple geometric shapes to draw car and used negative shape to represent the earth, so that the accent can be on the smoke. Also car and smoke, as negative elements, should be treated in same visual manner.
In order to make entire message more potent and direct, I used black and white, no other color. This makes the image more potent, almost like a logo. Finally, look at how the text is arranged (I’ll speak more of text in class next time):
Looks great..Just the way I visualised of making it, though I could not get the desired outcome.
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