Compositions

Norma
Class 0B
20151108102343

Make a beautiful image (08-11-15)

20151107103045 20151106142650-1Negative shape, low contrast (07-11-15)

Asymmetry, diagonal (06-11-15)

20151105145022

Asymmetry, rule of thirds (05-11-15)

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Rule of thirds, closure (04-11-15).

Conversation

Neko

Nice and smart image, it has also powerful symbolic meaning, but not quite adhering to rule of 1/3. See the difference below. Having that in mind, don't get me wrong, your image is very good as it is, especially because pulling the "girl" so close to the edge feels like she's held against the wall. In fact, for these reasons, and for this particular "message", your composition works better than rule of 1/3. It's just that it doesn't answer the given topic very well, which was the exercising of 1/3 composition. But overall it's an excellent image.

Neko

Asymmetry, rule of thirds: Absolutely perfect!!!!

Neko

Well, actually I do think that arranging in the following way would both comply more to rule of 1/3 and look better, with more "sky". :)

Norma

Thank you a lot!!

Norma

Thank you for your feedback, i will do it again in the way you showed in the last picture. Now i completely understand rules of third!

Neko

Asymmetry, diagonal: Good, very nice image! :)

Neko

Negative shape, low contrast (07-11-15): Yes, very good! I like the way you represented the negative shape in it's more simple and straightforward way, with no additional elements (which would be completely unnecessary). Also nice color and shades, looks like a cover of some (minimal music) album cover!

Neko

Stork nest photo: Beautiful photo!