Session 1B | Nov 11, 2015
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Session 1B | Nov 11, 2015


Tomomi Dambara
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  1. Neko says:

    Very nice composition, use of text could be much better but don’t worry I will talk a lot about text next time!
    Meanwhile I think you really don’t need that black stain :)

  2. Neko says:

    Ok, so in the end I’ve made one sketch which is competely different than what you’ve done, simply because I wanted to explore the possibilities of creating labyrinth using text only :) As for your composition, it’s a bit difficult to write down the text as it always appear as horizontal boxes that break the vertical rhythm of your image. And if we put text vertically, it’s getting too unreadable. Probably you would need to change the distribution of your vertical bars to allow more space to put the text in…
    Meanwhile, my attempt. Not quite good yet, but it was fun trying it :)

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